Hughes.Nina.Haku.-A Realization During A Seemingly-Mindless Pasttime Poem by Amanda Saveley

Hughes.Nina.Haku.-A Realization During A Seemingly-Mindless Pasttime

Rating: 5.0


A good man you were,
Devoted father,
Loyal friend,
Brought down by a bitter blow
That was not yours to bear
You died a death not your own
For reasons you did not understand
By a face stolen to cause you pause
So unjustifiably you passed
Leaving business unfinished in your wake

A sweet girl you were,
Affectionate daughter,
Loyal friend,
Brought down by a bitter blow
That was not yours to bear
You died a death not your own
For reasons you did not understand
By a man you trusted with your life
So unjustifiably you passed
Leaving a life incomplete in your wake

A dear boy you were,
Compassionate warrior,
Loyal friend,
Brought down by a bitter blow
That was not yours to bear
You died a death not your own
For reasons you did not understand
By a skilled opponent whose hand was unwilling
So unjustifiably you passed
Leaving a dream unrealized in your wake

And I witnessed your deaths,
Shedding tears of regret like gently fallen rain
Yes, I wept deeply for your passing
Though you are but mere characters on a screen,
Lines spread across a page,
I shed tears for your deaths so sudden, too soon

Because I can spare none for my own.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Surrealistic verse, dripping with deep abstract tone...though similar in style...you encapture the theatrics of them in equal portion...Smooth construction...mellifluous ...Solid Craftsmansip, Amanda... ~ F.j.R. ~

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