Hugs & Kisses And Valentines Deceit Poem by Aiden Florence

Hugs & Kisses And Valentines Deceit

Rating: 5.0


To welcome the feeling
Of warm pleasure incoming
You’ve become so vulnerable tonight

It feels so good to abide
With the pretense of life
It’s so hard to confide
With the deceit in sight
You’re saying you feel cherished
You’ve become so vulnerable tonight

To make this commitment tonight
Of respect and love under the eternal light
You’ve become so vulnerable tonight

Valentine is there for your perfection
Mesmerizing all the girls wanting attention
Filled with dramatic kisses and affection
Between pretending lovers and your own imagination
You’re hoping he’ll comeback for you again
You’ve become so vulnerable tonight

He’s playing you can’t you see
He doesn’t love you he just wants you
You’ve become so vulnerable tonight

Light will shatter
Relieve will break
Emotions will fall
And you’ll still want to celebrate with him
He already has you where he wants after all this
And You’re still so vulnerable tonight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tyease Collins 03 July 2008

I hope Cupid that you're not really like that. Another creation written from the heavens above. 10000000000000000/10 -Tyease

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Lilly Mandrell 20 February 2008

Thats so good. You decribed the seen varry well.: ] Lilly.

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Casey Gauthier 15 February 2008

I've always loved the concept of vulnerability.

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