Humanity Needs Affinity Poem by Shipra singh (ships)

Humanity Needs Affinity

Rating: 4.7


Try to make good your life,
Try to make good your likes,
Try to make good your choice.
There are good adequacy,
There are bad adversary.

Try to make others happy,
With your humanity.
Try to make others humanity,
With your affinity.

To be a good
We have to give food to poor,
To be a adamanter
We have to be a helper.

If you see anyone in problem,
Make a photo in mind album.
If you have ability,
Help with your affability.
Otherwise you are a cheater,
Who cheat themselves life.

By Shipra singh

Tuesday, June 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: morality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 06 June 2017

If you have ability, Help with your affability. yes you are portaying a great truth dear Poet. yes we are called by God to love, to show affinity especially to the poor and needy. thank you dear poet. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 June 2017

An other good effort. Thanks

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Siddartha Montik 07 June 2017

Wonderful truth in simple words.! YES we need Integrity in our Behavior! these Lines.. f you see anyone in problem, Make a photo in mind album. If you have ability, Help with your affability. Perfectly expressed in simple plea! Thank you Poet! ! 10++++!

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Ramesh T A 16 October 2018

Helping tendency is the first need of a human to help humanity to live in good condition! Nice one to read!

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 01 August 2018

A good simple write as it has to be. Thank you

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 July 2018

Try to make others happy, With your humanity. Try to make others humanity, With your affinity...the need of love, the need of nearness and affection........ very fine poem my dear poetess. your vision at your young age reveals so much of goodness in you. be great. tony

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Humanity needs affinity.A good job.Like it.

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Daniel Brick 08 June 2017

Your topic you identified as MORALITY: it is the moral force of AFFINITY which you highlight and I agree completely. It's the awareness that we are one human race and share this planet as our common home. That's why we care about each other. And that's why a poet in America reads poems by a poet in India, YOU HAVE WRITTEN THE TRUTH, SHIPRA, AND SHOW US WE NEED TO SAVE THE BEAUTY OF THE EARTH, BECAUSE IT IS OUR BEAUTY AS HUMAN BEINGS.

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