Rohan Nambiar

Rookie (17-01-1976 / Thalassery)

Humour In Dreams


A sense of humour in my mind
Go to sleep, better be clear
Restless thoughts had to stay
Some may make laugh the next day
Every moment with twilight
Rejoice comes to our face
Comes in dreams or often
Nothing distinct, men and animal
Nothing between ghost and god
All have humour at some times
Lips to open for a laugh
Is it to tease, make others merry
Retrace humour going to bed
Go to sleep, better be clear

Submitted: Saturday, June 14, 2008
Edited: Friday, August 01, 2008

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  • Rookie Stephanie Paul (8/17/2008 4:29:00 AM)

    This really does have a lovely sense of pace and an almost musical quality. It moves almost like a dream itself not always following a logical trail but still on your subject almost as though it is see through a veil. I really like this one! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 254 Points Ency Bearis (7/31/2008 1:41:00 PM)

    a very vague implication...to a dream..and Luke Easter is right what he said... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Donnalee Womack (7/15/2008 8:03:00 AM)

    Rohan, I think I like this one. No one knows if they are laughing in their sleep; but if others are watching they see you. I thought it was creative and artistic how you included the idea 'How can we trace a reaction within our dreams' What was so funny that made me laugh in my sleep? That is funny in itself. Thank you for letting me read this one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rajagopal haran (6/17/2008 7:53:00 PM)

    a great poem on the common phenominon in a different way...artistic Rohan....well done....keep writing...you have my 10 out of 10 (Report) Reply

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