Humour In Dreams Poem by Rohan Nambiar
Humour In Dreams
A sense of humour in my mind
Go to sleep, better be clear
Restless thoughts had to stay
Some may make laugh the next day
Every moment with twilight
Rejoice comes to our face
Comes in dreams or often
Nothing distinct, men and animal
Nothing between ghost and god
All have humour at some times
Lips to open for a laugh
Is it to tease, make others merry
Retrace humour going to bed
Go to sleep, better be clear
a very vague implication...to a dream..and Luke Easter is right what he said...
Rohan, I think I like this one. No one knows if they are laughing in their sleep; but if others are watching they see you. I thought it was creative and artistic how you included the idea 'How can we trace a reaction within our dreams' What was so funny that made me laugh in my sleep? That is funny in itself. Thank you for letting me read this one.
Sense of humour can help one to be more healthy. A good theme you have taken.
a great poem on the common phenominon in a different way...artistic Rohan....well done....keep writing...you have my 10 out of 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 6:11:44 PM # 1.0.0.1119
This really does have a lovely sense of pace and an almost musical quality. It moves almost like a dream itself not always following a logical trail but still on your subject almost as though it is see through a veil. I really like this one!