Hunting Memories, , , By (Musafir_Soul) Poem by Gaurav Pandey

Hunting Memories, , , By (Musafir_Soul)

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The breeze is touching my face,
As your love lay on me.
Coming from far away,
and steal my heart so deep.
and filled me with the sense of joy.
Where it from I cant even know,
But I am flowing in it that's all I know.
And I know it flows back to you.
just like an echo... just like a wave.
Wash away the pain as the smile reaching me again and again, ,
I touched you when i touch the breeze,
now want to hug you in the rain.
unity in a dream as love brings serenity,
it brings you..it brings me...together,
Endless in love, in paradise.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 29 November 2013

I changed some of our work The breeze is touching my face, As your love lay on me. Coming from far away, and steal my heart so deep. To fill me with the sense of life. Where it from I cant even know, But I am flowing in it that's all I know. And I know it flows back to you. just like an echo... just like a wave. Wash away the pain as the smile reaching me again and again, I touched you when i touch the breeze, Am i flying at the center of fantasy now want to hug you in the rain. unity in a dream as love brings serenity, it brings you..it brings me...together, Endlessly in love, in paradise between hearts Of you and me _Unwritten Soul

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Unwritten Soul 26 November 2013

I love this collaboration with you musafir, i guess it was a very spontaneous work just in 5 mins or 10 not because only small time we use but the direction is not astray from each verses, maybe people dont like it but its okay as to me you birthing some nice verses. maybe we should refine it when we have time...i like this personally _Soul

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