Hurt Poem by Jodilee Duke
Hurt
Now I just hurt
I feel nothing more
than incoming dirt.
Silence is building
back to the one sound l know
tink ~ tink ~ tink
into the tin can
my hope does sinks.
Unhooking the negative feed
not allowing it to seam my heart
I wont be another one of its collective pieces,
I'm a positive flow,
and because of this,
I'm alone.
Incoming dirt
covering me up
hiding me away.
Alone, now I pray.
Sadness can overshadow us for moments though not if the positive force in us human beings is willing to survive. Really nice poem this one is.
You make me feel like you could be cutted right now and you wont bleed! I feel like this right now... Too much pain getting inside, making us getting so empty...your words really touched me! Thanks for sharing!
i really like it, it sounds like a sad poem. i thinki you are a great writer
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 7:01:03 PM # 1.0.0.1119
wow this one is very deep. great job