Hurt Poem by Girl 2010

Hurt

Rating: 5.0


A feeling
That grows
And grows
Within you
Of someone that
Has been betrayed
And that
Someone
Is you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 16 October 2009

short...powerful and meaningful....packs a solid punch... well written arshia... also as sad a s the departing cranes in yonder villages (bandaey) of realms....! ! ! cheers

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Gold Fish 16 October 2009

Ouch. It swells and makes you want to get angry, go ballistic, cry or do something crazy. I hear you. Thanks for expressing. 10+

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