Hurt Me Again Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Hurt Me Again

Rating: 4.9


Why don’t you hurt me again?
If that helps you to position regain
Either way it has to be somebody’s gain
Concern and worry should not remain

Insult if that what you have in find?
No best opportunity you may find
Hurl abuses at me if you feel so unkind
I shall forgo and never mind

I might have hurt your feelings
I have regrets and also willing
To offer unconditional apology
Without caring for thought or psychology

We live and love to be loved
No room for hate and remain perturbed
No where it will lead but to only gallows
Simple path and with good dictum to follow

Don’t harm me with vicious campaign
Apology is only answer without causing pain
It will not cause me pain even if head is chopped
No failure will deter me even if show is flopped

Friends or enemies should not be offended
Battle can be won and interests defended
Not to surrender to evil designs and object
No immoral act and out rightly reject

Still heart may ache for ungrateful gesture
It won’t come in way or decide the future
Road blocks have to be cleared with firmness
With iron hand, if need be, with righteousness

I may not be remembered for my small tenure
Neither it will affect nor shadow any culture
So many may be waiting and pounce as vulture
I may wish them success ……………………..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lalvani Rekha 16 October 2009

Either way it has to be somebody’s gain Concern and worry should not remain.//////////nice one...10

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Christine Schmidt 16 October 2009

Very Good, somewhat of a 'pick-yourself-up-and-dust-yourself-off' message.

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Lady Grace 19 October 2009

''i may wish them success but don't hurt me again''...my goshhhhhhhhhhh...so sad...uhummmmmmm...smileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Pami Panchal 21 October 2009

might have hurt your feelings I have regrets and also willing To offer unconditional apology

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Umesh Lalvani 21 October 2009

Insult if that what you have in find? No best opportunity you may find Hurl abuses at me if you feel so unkind

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Vinod Kumar 28 October 2009

Great deal hashmukhbhai, Interesting theme Kunthi matha also prayed for Krishna while asking her step mother what will i do for you 'give me dear krishna heartfull of Pain' that is the satisfaction....thanks

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 27 October 2009

Dear Hashmukhlalbhai, Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem bubbling with confidence in Gandhian philosophy. I liked the poem though in some places you may re-work the rhyming pattern to have a better flow -personal opinion only. Saying that I have rated your poem highly. The beginning lines strikes me most: 'Why don't you hurt me again? If that helps you to position regain Either way it has to be somebody's gain Concern and worry should not remain' Like an actor entering the stage, you have overwhelmed your audience simply with the beginning lines. Rajkumar

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The Lost.. 27 October 2009

nice poem too.always people do hurt who loves them inorder to keep loving them.

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Louie -Love & Peace- Levy 22 October 2009

'Two wrongs do not make a 'Right'' Your thinking need to be re-viewed by, 'Self' All that are 'Self' are Godly Love is God and All that exists are of 'Love' Kindly reflect and allow Empathy, Love and Compassion to Heal

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Poonam Suthar 21 October 2009

Insult if that what you have in find? No best opportunity you may find

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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