Hurting Then Freedom Poem by who cares im in love and its not with u

Hurting Then Freedom



twists and turns
broken roads
so much pain
never again
to much drama
so many mistakes
almost a mama
no more retakes
life so short
time so limited
forget ur regrets
learn to love
deny all threats
let life be
god knows how much i love u
can u be free
i love u mommy

this poem is dedicated to my step mom yes i have a real mom but my step mom has been there for me more than my real mom has since my birth my stepmom just needs to know that life could be so much more if the little things didnt stand in her way....

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Leas Celyn 10 February 2011

i also like this poem and how you dedicated it to her.

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Leas Celyn 10 February 2011

i also like this poem and how you dedicated it to her.

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Gerard Parks 09 February 2011

Almost sounds like a cry of a lost child to there mother just to be accepted. I like it

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