Husband's Exit Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Husband's Exit

Rating: 5.0


Widow comes in existence with husband's exit
Painful memories to last with shaky feet
Whole life is in dark with no solution in sight
Life becomes burden and nothing goes right

Woman has some satisfaction if husband has gone away
He may return one day even if found another way
Widow is strictly not called with his exit from life
She stands legally as his estranged wife

Widower stage to felt if something is committed in excess
If husband is beating daily and provides no access
Sexual harassment followed by cruel treatment
Husband is buried alive in mind with resentment

It is living hell for woman to accept status of widow
No option is left for her to think of another window
It is dark future and unbelievable forecast for tomorrow
Nothing to think of world but keep quiet and lie low

Woman has tolerance power and world has acknowledged
She has come out of dark and at least without him managed
No one has dared to defy his womanhood for simple reason
That she is symbol of courage and well understood person

If men ever thinks that women can be played around
And desert them at will to be no where found
It is grave mistake and to be taken into count
Without woman it is almost difficult to mount

If woman is encouraged to show some guts
She may prove exceptionally talented figure, but
She has to be equally respected for her weak character
Now at least time has changed for her to show as formidable character

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 April 2012

Widow comes in existence with husband’s exit Painful memories to last with shaky feet

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 April 2012

Cyn BuhainBaello A very timely poem about the metamorphosis of the modern woman, and the new definition of a widow. A husband's exit out of a woman's life does not spell its end, for some, like me - it meant a relief and release and made a new woman out of me. Thank you for writing this.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2012

Rizvana Parveen Good composition.A realistic picture of a widow and her plight in today's society.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2012

Juwita Heart Optimization of the dignity of women showed positive symptoms, as he fell he did not really hurt, other forms can not be predicted more strongly than imagined, you see it, should have another look... is not about winning or losing and the fun...luv you Mehta! 2 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2012

Dear Hasmukh Bhai, You have shown the plight of a widow Who is like a cow without a meadow You have shown your deep sympathy And expressed your heartfelt empathy K.H. Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343 Apr 09,2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2012

Juwita Heart Optimization of the dignity of women showed positive symptoms, as he fell he did not really hurt, other forms can not be predicted more strongly than imagined, you see it, should have another look... is not about winning or losing and the fun...luv you Mehta!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 April 2012

Re: Husband's exit (Score: 1) by Zbird on Sunday, April 08,2012 (18: 43: 21) you always find strength in women and I am sure women find strength in your poems.

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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