I Poem by Katinka Havermans

I

Rating: 5.0


I
I don't
I don't want
I don't want to
I don't want to be
I don't want to be strong
All the time
I feel so helpless and alone
I feel so helpless and
I feel so helpless
I feel so
I feel
I

© KH

Friday, November 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 21 March 2020

lonlineess and conflicting emotions and thoughts. this is the real experience of so many. tony

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Bharati Nayak 21 September 2019

An amazing expression of your feelings, thanks for sharing.It is true that sometimes people consider us strong and we also portray ourselves as strong, but inside we may be feeling broke.Then one may want to say loudly that this is a false image and wants to come out of that false impression.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 October 2018

A 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ for the voting and ratings (a PH rule I discovered later)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 October 2018

Amazing poem, brilliantly rendered. A loveliest format, very original. I have read the poem time and again and it has got more power in the words. Thank you so much for sharing, Katinka.

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Sekharan Pookkat 07 May 2015

you are bold and strong to express your feelings

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