I Am Poem by Maira Eliz

I Am

Rating: 5.0


I'm happy, I'm happy
like cloudy days
I'm joyful, I'm joyful
like an empty room.

Saturday, November 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 23 February 2018

Using conflicting expressions to convey deep feelings is quite appropriate and poetically remarkable. Persuasive poetic expressions rich in paradox. You have a wonderful way with words. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 06 November 2017

The repetition of the words, happy and joyful sounds beautiful. A simple and brief couplet rising from a depressed heart and setting in a regressed mind. Thanks for sharing.

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