Rookie - 9 Points (01/07/1989 / PALA)

I am alone

Fishes live
Where water exists
But one feels
Its absence
No breath
No swimming
How horrible!
It exists No.
Wants to move No.
Tries to gain, yet
Caused all, Till
'Why to me'
'Not to all',
cried the fish.
'Open the mouth
Let'm in'
the reminder.
He opened mouth
let the life in
get energy
had the breath.
Mirror world
Mirrors world
the world around
I before mirror
Angry and smile
Nothing denied to me too.
I smiled
And the world too.

Submitted: Sunday, December 01, 2013

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Comments about this poem (I am alone by JOBY JOHN )

  • Rookie - 42 Points Mary Amrutha (12/6/2013 3:52:00 AM)

    gud but could have done better.. cuz the words are twisted that makes it complicated for the reader to understand (Report) Reply

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