I Am Death =] Poem by Robbie Hunt

I Am Death =]

Rating: 5.0


The call comes
From the underworld[head teacher]
He is to be taken
Against his will[from class]
To face the immortals
Of death and of hell[school],
To take responsibilty for his actions[getting in trouble]
His fate rests in their hands.

But unfortunately I am not trusting them,
For they are kiniving,
Blood thirsty, hell-hounds -
also known as teachers.

Now as he waits in the valley of death[hallway]
I count down to his demise.

Tragedy strikes,
They rip out his soul
And force him into the 'pit'[detention room],
The most gruesome of places
Filled with all kinds of scum
Pirates[bullies],
Mad scientists[geeks]
And the worst of all;
Me.

I am death itself
I strike fear into the eyes
Of all unwilling souls
I crush any that stand in my way.

I am the Principal.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 15 October 2009

Robbie, enjoyed the way you wrote this, especially the use of the asides. Your surprise ending was well thought out. You deserve a ten for your invention.10/10 Regards, Ian

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