I Am Held Together By Pieces Of String Poem by Colm Hayes

I Am Held Together By Pieces Of String

Rating: 3.8


I am held together by pieces of string
That fray with each step taken
My once great strength has long since faded
My muscles are burning, my bones are aching
Yet I struggle forth tired and jaded, I struggle forth tired and jaded.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 27 May 2008

The first four lines are excellant. The repetition is also a device I favor. I find this to be a fair poem and delightful to read. I shall merit it a solid 8.

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