I'm a lost moon in day
Like lost night in night
Lost as a light in light
I'm lost in your longing
But I am not lost in you
I am longing for a long
Longing for your smile
And for your rhymes
I'm longing for your eyes
But I am not lost in you
My wings of time is you
Smile in a night is you
Your a light in my light
I lost heart in your love
But I am not lost in you
Your ruling all my senses
Its blind and deaf for you
Makes me lost in longing
Yet I am I, who long to be
Me, myself and I but not you
Its a good write... maybe you should of being a little clearer...10s
After many twists and turns, finally 'I am what I am' comes out. A nice poem.
a poem of self with great conviction, even there are presence of tides and wanders, firmness held you well...nice piece! ! !
We all feel we may lose our true self in our efforts to impress the ones we love.But love is never about turning into someone else. Our true self emerges stronger and brighter than before. Well expressed
you will get so lost in love, that you forget 'who you are'. that's the power of love. a gr8888t write. a ten, if ph allows mw to rate it. ph issues going on.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Stay the course. Don't be distracted by life. Always be you. Beautifully crafted.