Kranthi Pothineni


I Am I - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

I'm a lost moon in day
Like lost night in night
Lost as a light in light
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Comments about I Am I by Kranthi Pothineni

  • Silver Star - 3,289 Points Walterrean Salley (12/24/2009 11:21:00 PM)

    Always stay true to self. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 794 Points Louis Rams (12/19/2009 10:15:00 AM)

    p.s. it's not allowing votes.
    sorry (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 794 Points Louis Rams (12/19/2009 10:14:00 AM)

    p.s. it's not allowing votes.
    sorry (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 794 Points Louis Rams (12/19/2009 10:12:00 AM)

    you will get so lost in love, that you forget 'who you are'.
    that's the power of love. a gr8888t write. a ten, if ph allows mw to rate it.
    ph issues going on. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 108 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/19/2009 2:41:00 AM)

    quite touchy... very smooth and nice flow! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 94 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (12/19/2009 1:25:00 AM)

    ‘…I'm lost in your longing // But I am not lost in you…’

    Touchy and moving…enjoyed...thanks...
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Anju Addanki (12/18/2009 8:34:00 AM)

    thats a good one cleverly penned (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,232 Points Marieta Maglas (12/18/2009 8:28:00 AM)

    nice visual metaphor very well combined with a double simile:
    I'm a lost moon in day
    Like lost night in night
    Lost as a light in light
    wonderful symbolistic poem

    10+++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 791 Points Antonio Liao (12/17/2009 2:31:00 AM)

    what an ego of Narcissism alive in this present day's....
    what a laugh my dear friend....so fantastic and eloquent in mood....
    beautiful poem....
    a God bless, a 10 with a big Star..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Padmapriya Boddapati (12/16/2009 11:34:00 PM)

    We all feel we may lose our true self in our efforts to impress the ones we love.But love is never about turning into someone else. Our true self emerges stronger and brighter than before. Well expressed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (12/16/2009 8:26:00 PM)

    a poem of self with great conviction, even there are presence of tides and wanders, firmness held you well...nice piece! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 23 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (12/16/2009 7:06:00 PM)

    After many twists and turns, finally 'I am what I am' comes out. A nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (12/16/2009 5:25:00 PM)

    Its a good write...
    maybe you should of being a little clearer...10s (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,289 Points Walterrean Salley (12/16/2009 3:02:00 PM)

    Stay the course. Don't be distracted by life. Always be you. Beautifully crafted. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Janell Cressman (12/16/2009 11:50:00 AM)

    this is AWESOME! ! ! ! ! I really like this one! ! ! !) (10) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Joseph Poewhit (12/16/2009 11:49:00 AM)

    Must be ourselves in life (Report) Reply










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