.....I Am Imitating You Poem by RIC BASTASA

.....I Am Imitating You

Rating: 3.1


.... let me flatter a friend (or is she.... a foe?)

....i am imitating him. Oh i want a color....red?

or......blue? I'll take something else..........green?

how about trees? apple trees for a background.
how about sighs? for some sounds.
how about... yes.....moans.... lots of moans.....
sex? could you?

.....you are bored and old and.....dying? ....are you?

how about cheese? lots of cheese
oh i love fumodoro tomatoes? lots of sauce.

i love being with you.
I love doing things with you inside the room.
Let me have you.
Please stay.
I still have lots of cheese, and tomatoes,
and apple trees, and reds and greens, and...

sighs.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 14 June 2013

your last stanza is nice, good write

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 18 February 2010

love does not expire between strong married couples. Nice poem!

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Bryan Alexander 23 September 2009

I hate tomatoes but i like this poem. It reminds me of something Bukowski could have done and he is my favorite. Great right.

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Sherri Coulter 21 September 2009

I am not old, not dying, sighing yes, about life.and u in it, trying to figure it out. and no to foe no to bored.......yes to everything else.

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