I Am Just A Sound Wave Poem by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

I Am Just A Sound Wave

Rating: 4.7


I felt it today
The detachment
from attachment
The connection
Between

Affliction and affection
Inspiration for perspiration
Emotional give and take
Where trust is never safe

I also am devoid of guilts
You gave some, I gave a lot
It's alright
something's in life
cannot be bought

We are all
recycled products
Many lifetimes
have etched out the hurts

I feel no happiness
Sadness has no place
My heart feels like
An alien landscape

This state of non feeling
Of being a non being
I must be anti matter
Or just a sound wave

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Somanathan Iyer 01 September 2014

Nice expressions, good write!

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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi 01 September 2014

Thank you Mr Somanathan Iyer for liking my poem. Thanks Donnie for reading and commenting.

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Donnie Wolff 31 August 2014

Even ant matter, matters. I wrote a new poem, read it. They seem to fit.

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Siddartha Montik 23 November 2016

'Captivvating openiniing verse' - etched. by many lines (lives) , only to culminate in closing verses.....the strategy of non being. of being a non-beimg! something certainly sounds spiritual here! wonderful conception so gently. narrated. thank you for sharing.

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Terry Craddock 06 November 2016

'We are all recycled products Many lifetimes have etched out the hurts I feel no happiness Sadness has no place My heart feels like An alien landscape' there is a huge richness, when gifted poets gigt simple lines; matter, anti matter, a sound wave, all beauty flows through the transiant states of your words :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 August 2015

This state of non feeling Of being a non being I must be anti matter Or just a sound wave about such a feeling i heard from a Budhhist Monsatry in Peking. non being..... a bit of religious philosophy thank you very much

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 18 April 2015

We are all recycled products Truly said. Loved reading it.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 08 September 2014

Good message Sadness has no a place A good poem and great writing. Liked it.

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