I felt it today
The detachment
from attachment
The connection
Between
Affliction and affection
Inspiration for perspiration
Emotional give and take
Where trust is never safe
I also am devoid of guilts
You gave some, I gave a lot
It's alright
something's in life
cannot be bought
We are all
recycled products
Many lifetimes
have etched out the hurts
I feel no happiness
Sadness has no place
My heart feels like
An alien landscape
This state of non feeling
Of being a non being
I must be anti matter
Or just a sound wave
Thank you Mr Somanathan Iyer for liking my poem. Thanks Donnie for reading and commenting.
Even ant matter, matters. I wrote a new poem, read it. They seem to fit.
'Captivvating openiniing verse' - etched. by many lines (lives) , only to culminate in closing verses.....the strategy of non being. of being a non-beimg! something certainly sounds spiritual here! wonderful conception so gently. narrated. thank you for sharing.
'We are all recycled products Many lifetimes have etched out the hurts I feel no happiness Sadness has no place My heart feels like An alien landscape' there is a huge richness, when gifted poets gigt simple lines; matter, anti matter, a sound wave, all beauty flows through the transiant states of your words :)
This state of non feeling Of being a non being I must be anti matter Or just a sound wave about such a feeling i heard from a Budhhist Monsatry in Peking. non being..... a bit of religious philosophy thank you very much
We are all recycled products Truly said. Loved reading it.
Good message Sadness has no a place A good poem and great writing. Liked it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice expressions, good write!