I Am Left, On My Own! ! ! Poem by Sandhya S.N

A candid and powerful look at the great beyond.Thanks for sharing.

There is an incompleteness and uncertainty in the life of all of us. Our mind is unable understand it and the senses cannot feel it. Our intutive power which is the link between us and the Absolute is weak. So, we swing between the joys and sorrows. A good attempt. You started very well but faltered a bit in the middle. Well done, keep it up. CP

very touching....i like the words written i can relate to it though i'm not being left alone..but being attended with much attention overly cared of can also feel that way...like being left alone...don't know what to decide and what to do... ...your piece is an expression of pain and doubt...of joy and assurance.... then finally ended sadly.... very convincing...very realistic....our life is just like this.... nice write....

A touching sensitively written piece, we all feel uncertain of our futures sometimes, very well put, 10 Lynda xx

Dear Sandhya, (I am a Trivandrum native, my house at Sreevaraham, student of Womens College and at present in Kochi.) I am touched by the pathos in your poem and I wonder at 31, probably married with kids, what tragedy befell you

it is good u realised it so early life. it is said even children do not belong to parents.they are simply under their care only. rest is the work of Him.nice poem.posted 10. surya

Sandya, this piece was truely expressed my feeling.. Some questions which haunt my soul as always.. I do enjoy it.. Keep writing my new friend! Take care.

Dear Sandhya, If we believe in birth, death and re-birth, then we certainly know we are to carry it alone. But someone who has heard a clarion call in her heart, why at all she should be sad in her writing? We might have to crawl and see our children doing the same. That's life. Enjoy it.So much of question marks and note of exclamations made the road of the poem a little bumpy, may I say so? Still it is a good effort. I give you --9--Rajkumar N.B.-May I request you to read my poem 'Symphony' and see whether you like the flow and the rhyme. It is my first visit to your city.

Excellant. But to express your feelings and emotion you used many many words.Keep in mind that poetry is not prose. But still a good piece.

This is certainly a fine enough poem, Sandhya, but you got carried away with the punctuation in it. You don't need all those exclamation marks where one will suffice, and especially not after a line ending with a question mark. Also, using U for you is improper in poetry, but fine on the internet shorthand e-mails that are used today. And the word 'Or' after the end of the 3rd line of your sixth verse and all it's excessive and unneccessary punctuation, should simply be the beginning word of the 4th line of that verse. All that aside, I liked this poem and it was very expressive and well told, except for that excessive punctuation.