jitesh shah

Freshman - 758 Points (8 January,1970 / Ahmedabad, Gujarat, India)

I Am Nothing - Poem by jitesh shah

The Mango Tree Gets Mango,

The River Gets Water,

The Cow Gets Milk,

The Teacher Gets Knowledge,

The Flower Gets Smell,

The Sun Gets Luster,

The Moon Gets Coolness,

The Monsoon Gets Rain,

Many People Gets Lot,

They All give us Lot,

Says, I AM NOTHING

They all live for others.

We also Gets lot of Love, Laugh and Pleasing to others Life,

And Live free and nicely.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

this story of give lot on love laugh and pleasing to another life nice and free

Comments about I Am Nothing by jitesh shah

  • Gold Star - 12,979 Points Rajnish Manga (3/28/2015 12:02:00 AM)

    The thread of humility runs through the poem. This is what inspires us to be down to earth and to do whatever we can for the sake of fellow human being. It will make our lives worth it. Great poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,078 Points Patricia Grantham (4/23/2014 7:36:00 AM)

    All of the nothings are really something. Turn it
    all around and it becomes positive. We all have
    some special talent/s. Thought provoking. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - -1 Points Totes Sheldon (4/3/2014 11:31:00 AM)

    I would agree that you are nothing. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 671 Points Mike Barrett (3/26/2014 4:20:00 PM)

    Hi Jitesh, I agree with Valerie's comments.....we are all Soul and as such are priceless in God's eyes. As a child mu mum gave each of us kids this advice, as you move out into the world you'll find some people will like you, some won't and many will be indifferent. Similarly you'll like some, not like others as much, and will see others in a neutral light. Wish all well but spend your time with those you like and those who like you back. Not bad advice really......it's served me well for these past 70 years. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,501 Points Valerie Dohren (3/22/2014 4:26:00 PM)

    No-one is nothing, we all have something valuable to give. Well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,957 Points Gajanan Mishra (3/21/2014 12:40:00 PM)

    live nice and free, very fine one. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,953 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (3/20/2014 12:47:00 PM)

    Those who give a lot say 'I am nothing'. But they are something. Nicely said. Keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 659 Points V P Mahur (3/16/2014 9:07:00 AM)

    dear Jitesh,
    giving and taking is a natural process of the world.
    if we give something with our true heart, we need not be ashamed. Nice words.

    I invite you to read my poems and send your comments. You can try this one:

    'Truth of Creation'
    What will be the future
    Of the nation
    If the people keep their attention
    Towards only one direction
    If only a wheel is cared
    The other wheel is punctured
    And the chariot
    Of the country
    Will go in the dust (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 361 Points Shania K. Younce (3/13/2014 10:52:00 PM)

    This is a really fine poem. Very nice. The poem has a well flow. Bien! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, December 5, 2014


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