I Am Sorry, Sir! Poem by aung si myanmar

I Am Sorry, Sir!

Rating: 5.0


Discerning deeply what I was wrong,
I felt guilty and sad songs.
I deserve being scolded for my mistake.
'I'm a humble student, 'it's my faith.

Though this is not the terrible trauma,
I made you angry and bitter.
But I never failed to pay respect.
Anyway I'll compensate with the tacit attempt.

By grappling ruth and racy words,
You help me be on the right tract
And kill unaccpectable and dangerous thoughts
For my future not to be locked.

Via the nib of plea-showing soul,
Nail myself the troth, 'Eager to bow.'
This poetry declares my heartfelt apology.
Please.....Please.....I am so sorry!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 16 February 2013

Wow dear bro. this poem is perfect. the title is so attracting and the lines are just perfect. when we respect our older people and the older humans \, For sure we will be respect a day brilliant write.

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Vikrant Jog 02 February 2013

Honest attempt made to apologize is a quality. Never miss it. Good. Keep up

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Well done! if im ur sir ill forgive u in an instant! seldom people accept their mistakes and ask forgiveness, more likely, they will find an alibi to cover up. Nice!

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Poetheart Morgan 16 December 2012

It is to be a poet, expressing themselves through the heart. Very moving! ! ! !

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Babatunde Aremu 05 December 2012

Ability to accept our faults is a great virtue. This is demonstrated in this poem. Well written in plain language for all to understand. I lke it.

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