(brief renderings) Joe Fazio


I Am The Beach... - Poem by (brief renderings) Joe Fazio

As we walked along the beach, crashing waves
thundered in our ears and a light, salted mist,
dampened our lips.
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Comments about I Am The Beach... by (brief renderings) Joe Fazio

  • Rookie Joshua Beavan (4/6/2013 2:22:00 AM)

    This is a great poem well done keep up the good work (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Joshua Beavan (4/6/2013 2:21:00 AM)

    I have just made a poem about the beach called The Beach is My Home. my name is Joshua Beavan and i am 13 do you have any types on how to make mine better. sorry for spelling mistakes and grammar/ penetration

    As I walk along the beach, the waves crashing near,
    The sound of thunder threw my ear;
    The soft crystal sand slides threw my feat,
    The fearing of love kind of like a treat;

    As the misc of water passes threw the air,
    It goes over my face and threw my hair;
    The salt In the air, stinging my lips,
    As if I was eating salt and vinegar chips;

    As I watch the sun shine down on the sea,
    The glistering water, is enough confront for me
    The eyes from the rocks, its face to be
    The only thing that, you can’t make flee;

    As the waves crash near, they soon retreat,
    To the bottom of the ocean, within a beat:
    The dunes look down, casting spell’s,
    Over the ocean, covering the shells;

    As the sun goes down, the horizon draws near,
    The sea goes dead with nothing to hear;
    The culers in the sky, to great for me,
    The beach is a great place I hope you can see. (Report) Reply








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