I Am The Whirlwind Poem by Romeo Della Valle
I Am The Whirlwind
Outside,
The wind breathes through me
As though it was alive
And I was the element
Cutting through the edges
Of time and stillness
With the angles of my mind...
A hollow shell washed out
From the Sea
Onto the shore of life
With the echoes of forever
Swirling inside...
I am the whirlwind
Storming through eternity,
Impressing my passing journey
Into the Earth's tranquility...
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Great write Rome! I love the angles of my mind and echoes of forever lines brilliant! One little thing, formally, the last stanza I am a whirlwind should it perhaps be the whirlwind because the poem has a great specificity to I and using an indefinite article didn't quite seem to fit this unique beautifully destructive image All the best, man
I am a whirlwind Storming through eternity, Impressing my passing journey Into the Earth's tranquility... this poem is itself a whirlwind storming through the eternity. with best regards
Yes, this is the sound of the ocean/wind inside a shell: the sound of eternity. It is a haunting allusion you make that transports one to those turbulent places only to be nestled back in the safety of the earth mother. Well done Romeo.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
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4/22/2024 6:59:54 AM # 1.0.0.1119
This is magical Romeo. Truly magical.