I And I Poem by Daniel Erdner

I And I

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I a depraved and ravaged soul
I a fearful and childish fool
I a willing deceiver
I a humble believer
I a bearer of great wealth
I the loser of my self
I a wizard in my training
I cannot be self sustaining
I have been a great beginner
I have never been a winner
I the saint and then the sinner
I the paint and then the thinner
I the learner from the moment
I the forgetter of what it meant
I am the sum of what I live and see
I realize this life is not all about me

Tuesday, September 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 29 March 2019

Expressing fearful and childish state in mind is amazing but this sometimes provokes thought. You have sum within self. What you see and what you feel are gathered as memories. You realize this life from different corners. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.10

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Chinedu Dike 25 September 2014

Reminds me of the reggae song that says only I and I will rule my destiny. Lovely thanks for sharing. Please have a look at my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 September 2014

Well penned, I am the sum of what I live and see thank you

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