I Awoke Poem by Charles Chaim Wax

I Awoke

Rating: 4.5


at 3: 45 in the morning
full moon
shining through
my window
began scribbling
at once
the majestic sphere
demanding a response
ten minutes later
no go
mush
put up tea
words still swirling
without a proper place
when the flame
somehow
ignited my shirt
searing skin.
and although
I quickly put it out
a moment later
the terror
of burning to death
so ripped off the material
throwing it in the garbage.
The magic marker
in my hand
writing on the kitchen wall:
Forget the moon
Watch the flame.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lori Boulard 05 November 2005

ah yes. Sometimes inspiration comes subtly, sometimes as flames on your back. Well done.

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Raynette Eitel 05 November 2005

When your muse lets you down with the moon, you must go to the flame. Good poem. Raynette

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Faith Elizabeth Brigham 05 November 2005

powerful poem...good strong writing...you get a 10 from me.. best regards-faith

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