I Beg You To Live Poem by Amy Ludidi

do you beg someone to live or leave?

A well written love tragic...............you beg him to live........so that you can live too! ! Keep writing Amy.Good job.

wonderful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I think we all have had friends like this at one point in our lives. nice flow. I love the end. good job. Cryatal

Wonderful. The power of a real friend to see, hear and touch. Those who have such friends are rich indeed. I like this poem. Keep writing.

I was listening to Dark Matter by Porcupine Tree while I read this. It enhanced the mood of your poem. Very expressive.

Empathy is a gift and a burden

So heartfelt Amy, penned smoothly with so much emotions into it...Hope to read more of your poems, waiting for the next.10

i love this poem it is truely great.i love every bit of it.it really touched my heart.

Amy - You share your genuine feelings in real context. This is the heart of true poetry. The right words will always come to you. Blessings - Cheryl