I Came..You Saw..............................We Conquered/Defeated Poem by trinity aana

I Came..You Saw..............................We Conquered/Defeated

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HAND IN GLOVE WE WERE LIKE TWO WORMS IN A PEA POD
WHEN WE WERE UP THERE
I CAME YOU CAME, I SAW YOU
YOU SAW ME
WE WERE MISSING OUR LITTLE TOMB..THAT PEA POD
I DESIRE.... YOU SAW WITH A SMILE ON LIPS STAR IN EYES
HEY, YOU GARDENER..
NOW LISTEN.......... IT WAS PEACE..IN OUR TOMB
WE WERE LAUGHING PLAYING CAJOLING TEASING CRYING
WORMS IN OUR LITTLE SERENE MOSQUE OF A PEA POD
TORMENT...TOTAL COMPLETE STRIKE OF EMOTIONS
WORLD WAS OUR OYSTER..... YOU PROMISED
WE BELIEVED...... YEA... YOU... MULTI FACETED OMNIPOTENT
I SAW I CAME TO CONQUER
DEFEATED...YOU DECLARED.... NOT YET... MY SWEET...
WE WERE WORMS...AFTERALL...
GIVE US OR WE TAKE OUR CHANCE..ONE TIME MORE
..WE ARE WORMS...OUT OF A PEA POD....! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 25 September 2008

a lost calcyon, miss, and lobe of lost loves WORLD WAS OUR OYSTER..... YOU PROMISED WE BELIEVED...... YEA... YOU... MULTI FACETED OMNIPOTENT

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Dr.subhendu Kar 11 August 2008

WORMS IN OUR LITTLE SERENE MOSQUE OF A PEA POD................. worms yet embarks upon the green the grin when shtashed within the tomb life bestirs by the betiding breath quest still pevades in time and space across the wild stream to conquer bliss..................exuberance flows by the walls of rays, superb write, well penned,10+

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John Tiong Chunghoo 07 June 2008

yes, i love. great imagination. clam fruit of meditation a perfect pearl

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