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brandon greb


I Can't Stop Thinking About Her


She has this grip on me
that will not release
she has these eyes
and this smile that tease
when I look at her I can't turn away
when I go to sleep I think about her
when I wake up I think about her
I daydream of her
her love is a necessity
her company is what makes
my heartbeat keep pace
her hair, the way she smells
I love it, I wish I could be with her everyday
and feel the soft touch of her lips to mine
to caress her and hold hands as we sashay
through the park at night
with the lamps illuminating her beautiful face
and as we stare into each others eyes
and I tell her that I love her
she tells me that she loves me
and just like the movies, on a nearby tree
I carve a heart with our names in it
and we leave in blissful content
this is what i think about when i think of her
this is what i dream about when i dream of her
I can't stop thinking about her
and I love her for that
I love her for having me think about her

Submitted: Sunday, April 24, 2011
Edited: Friday, May 20, 2011

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