I Can'T Write A Poem Poem by Jacob Slavish

I Can'T Write A Poem

Rating: 4.5


Forget it

You must be kidding

I don't know how

My desk is wobbly 

My stomach hurts

I'm still half asleep 

I don't have a pencil 

The class is to loud 

My brain isn't working 

I can't focus 

Time's up? Uh oh! 

All I have is a dumb list of excuses. 

You like it? Really? No kidding. Thanks a lot.
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Thursday, March 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: school
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 12 March 2015

The poem sounds funny - just a bit funny, but on closer examination, it bristles with insight. It's a lovely poem depicting a typical off-day, when everything seem to go the wrong way. A nice piece of poetry well penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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