Amitava Sur

Bronze Star - 6,611 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

I Cannot Wait Any More.


Now I have lost all my patience
I cannot wait any more.

I learned to live – with my tears,
And to live with myself alone.

Neither there is any dream left
Nor any hope anymore

Not even any complaint
With any restlessness around.

If anything residual
That remains in my heart.

That is my love for you
Which will remain for ever

I kept my love very carefully,
Inside my heart’s core.

Now I’ll live with the love you left
Silently alone.

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Amitava Sur (9.04.2014) 1-45 am

Submitted: Thursday, April 10, 2014
Edited: Friday, April 11, 2014

Topic of this poem: Grief


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Comments about this poem (I Cannot Wait Any More. by Amitava Sur )

  • Bronze Star - 6,050 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/6/2014 7:23:00 PM)

    I love this poem of silent love. The first two lines of your poem speaks of an impatient mind, the last two of a serene, silent and settled one.
    A nice poem to read and enjoy.
    I loved and agree with the comments of Valerie Dohren and Soulful Heart. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,806 Points Patricia Grantham (4/11/2014 11:00:00 AM)

    Ti have loved and lost is better to have never loved at
    all. Keep hope alive! Nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,827 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/11/2014 6:06:00 AM)

    Now I’ll live with your love only
    Silently alone. lovely lines....10

    love to live
    and believe
    and that it demands sacrifice
    and future promises (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,411 Points * Sunprincess * (4/10/2014 7:29:00 PM)

    ......I agree with Valerie, we must remember the love and our loved one's
    who have gone away from us...wonderful write... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,025 Points Valerie Dohren (4/10/2014 1:12:00 PM)

    As long as you remember the love Amitava, you have something to treasure. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,905 Points Soulful Heart (4/10/2014 12:52:00 AM)

    so poignant.......................a soulful love that is nurtured in loneliness........... (Report) Reply

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