Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 9,831 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

I Cannot Wait Any More. - Poem by Amitava Sur

Now I have lost all my patience
I cannot wait any more.

I learned to live – with my tears,
And to live with myself alone.

Neither there is any dream left
Nor any hope anymore

Not even any complaint
With any restlessness around.

If anything residual
That remains in my heart.

That is my love for you
Which will remain for ever

I kept my love very carefully,
Inside my heart’s core.

Now I’ll live with the love you left
Silently alone.

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Amitava Sur (9.04.2014) 1-45 am


Comments about I Cannot Wait Any More. by Amitava Sur

  • Gold Star - 8,906 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/6/2014 7:23:00 PM)

    I love this poem of silent love. The first two lines of your poem speaks of an impatient mind, the last two of a serene, silent and settled one.
    A nice poem to read and enjoy.
    I loved and agree with the comments of Valerie Dohren and Soulful Heart. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 4,653 Points Patricia Grantham (4/11/2014 11:00:00 AM)

    Ti have loved and lost is better to have never loved at
    all. Keep hope alive! Nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,221 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/11/2014 6:06:00 AM)

    Now I’ll live with your love only
    Silently alone. lovely lines....10

    love to live
    and believe
    and that it demands sacrifice
    and future promises (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,840 Points * Sunprincess * (4/10/2014 7:29:00 PM)

    ......I agree with Valerie, we must remember the love and our loved one's
    who have gone away from us...wonderful write... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,680 Points Valerie Dohren (4/10/2014 1:12:00 PM)

    As long as you remember the love Amitava, you have something to treasure. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,939 Points Soulful Heart (4/10/2014 12:52:00 AM)

    so poignant.......................a soulful love that is nurtured in loneliness........... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 10, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, April 11, 2014


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