Freespirit Juneja

Rookie - 3 Points (09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

I Cant Stop Missing You - Poem by Freespirit Juneja

I can't stop missing you


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Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain


Poet's Notes about The Poem

When someone misses his / her love

Comments about I Cant Stop Missing You by Freespirit Juneja

  • Charity Nduhiu (8/18/2015 1:03:00 AM)


    I can't stop missing you such a sweet dedication. I have loved it. Thanks (Report) Reply

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  • Lyn Paul (5/19/2014 4:49:00 AM)


    So beautifully written (Report) Reply

  • (5/19/2014 3:56:00 AM)


    Like this too. Maybe some work on the rhyme scheme (my POV) might make it even better... (Report) Reply

  • (5/19/2014 2:48:00 AM)


    Light years far from your beautiful sound
    My heart wants to run and eschew
    But nothing can part me from you......

    beautiful lines..
    nice poem
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  • Soumita Sarkar (5/20/2013 12:30:00 AM)


    the pain of missing someone is so genuine..............keep writing! I invite you to go through my poems.Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • (5/19/2013 9:34:00 PM)


    I Can't stop praising you. So natural as if like a fountain it spontaneously came out of your heart! Awesome! (Report) Reply

  • (5/19/2013 10:49:00 AM)


    Too ordinary. Nothing exceptional. Expressions lack clarity. I am sorry, it did not appeal to me. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (5/19/2013 1:55:00 AM)


    I can not stop missing you, good poem, (Report) Reply

  • Jayne Davies (5/19/2013 1:36:00 AM)


    Great poem! Well done x (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (3/16/2013 8:02:00 PM)


    I really love this poem. Missing someone that you really love can be heartbreaking.
    Hopefully this kind of love will not take you too far to the point of no return. Good write.
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  • (9/26/2012 6:07:00 AM)


    Nice work Shard! ! Missing someone is to find them in your thought every new second :) (Report) Reply

  • (6/10/2012 9:49:00 AM)


    Seems like I am lost in the crowd
    Light years away is your beautiful sound
    Everyday is a haunting raid
    Still early to go into Hades
    My heart wants to run and eschew
    But nothing can part me from you
    Because I can't stop missing you

    Great....I love this poem a lot.....

    -Rain..
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  • (6/6/2012 6:49:00 PM)


    I find this beautiful and haunting. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (5/19/2012 8:05:00 AM)


    I love the words-Every day is a haunting raid.Your diction is associated with a deep feeling.Thus the words get life in your hand. (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee (5/19/2012 12:22:00 AM)


    very poignant...very touching...but one has to grow out of obsessions sooner or later... (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2012 12:42:00 PM)


    Wow, truelly wonderful (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (4/20/2012 9:13:00 AM)


    A wonder heartfelt poem, well written. (Report) Reply

  • Lizzie O'neill (4/19/2012 12:26:00 PM)


    Wow truly beautiful..very powerful (Report) Reply

  • (4/19/2012 3:30:00 AM)


    Your write very beauitful and touchy indeed, i am a new memeber to this site, but i must say i've read a few of your peoms. I have to say they are astounishing indeed. i very much like the repetition in the end! (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (4/18/2012 6:57:00 AM)


    Another lovely poem - I think I would exchange the word `perspiring` for `weeping`, the latter being more poetic. (Report) Reply










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