Fay Slimm

Rookie - 17 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

I Carry Words. - Poem by Fay Slimm

The sound of love breathes
On me words to curl around
Your heart. Carried with my care
They come tenderly bound.

I have words which spring
From nectar's well, heaven-blown
Into my soul, ocean deep
They speed across the foam.

Weighty with comfort
My words flow gently along.
Meant to warm you, and carried
Willingly is my word-song.


Comments about I Carry Words. by Fay Slimm

  • Rookie - 5 Points Janell Cressman (4/19/2009 2:23:00 PM)

    lovely, absolutely beautiful,
    would love to know what you think about my poems,
    live life, need, soldiers heart and God heals everything.
    thanks so much! !
    AWESOME POEM! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 26 Points Fiona Davidson (4/13/2009 12:40:00 PM)

    The images just shine through your words Fay...wonderful write....Fi 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (4/13/2009 2:07:00 AM)

    yes you do.. beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (4/13/2009 12:50:00 AM)

    Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Heart touching piece Fay! nice imagery here...Your warm words flowed so naturally! ! ! 10+++++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 13, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, April 13, 2009


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