Dash Black


I Come With Love Poem by Dash Black


Dead sores and bruised toes
Up and down the silent shores
Cuts deep, drilled by poisonous foes
In and out of dungeons and dangerous holes

Skeletal thin; hardly covered with skin
Shallow faced and hollowed cheeks up my chin
Been traveling in deserts violent and mean
Sad nights, weirdly pitch black and dim

Up, through and under misty mountains void of life
Stumbling and falling I walked on in the dearth of light
Now torn garments and a skeletal shadow braces my sight
Startling and bearing witness to the consequences of my fight

With bruised toes and sores thus I come
With deep cuts drilled by foes, I arrive home
Past misty mountains, through, up and above
I stoutly come home with love

Submitted: Sunday, August 25, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 4, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 12,234 Points Ramesh Rai (9/23/2013 10:42:00 PM)

    I agree with all my friends who have commented. never to stop is life indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,741 Points Heather Wilkins (9/4/2013 12:24:00 PM)

    enduring all the hardships of life you come home with love. excellent (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,947 Points Hazel Durham (9/1/2013 6:15:00 AM)

    What a journey of hardship and pain to survive it all with love still in your heart!
    Beautiful write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 52 Points Princess Lilypad (8/31/2013 1:05:00 PM)

    Wonderful imagery, I could feel the desperation and what a beautiful ending. home. so sweet. great words used to paint a picture, is this a soldier's tale? it rings military strife...the return home. beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,027 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/26/2013 10:23:00 PM)

    The poem would look better with little bit of trimming. Natural flow of words, however unrhymed, is much better than the rhyming ones that you struggle to find.
    The last stanza is soothing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ellen Shaw (8/26/2013 10:04:00 PM)

    The last verse completes this poem perfectly. Great poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 54 Points Cassandra Jasmine (8/26/2013 3:39:00 PM)

    This is an interesting write! Quite a different style than most poems I have read.
    However, I love how livid and alive this poem seems.
    It is fairly touching, and I love it!
    Cassandra Jasmine (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,371 Points Patricia Grantham (8/26/2013 8:44:00 AM)

    This poem is written with such beauty and courage. Through your poem
    I sense a boldness to want to come out and from under a life of darkness
    and into a life of light and wonder. Love is the greatest of all feelings and
    it conquers hate. Yes come with love! Thank you and Amen. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Pratikxa Sedhain (8/26/2013 7:55:00 AM)

    So heart touching poem................
    nice rhyming......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Akshaya Pawasker (8/26/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    Through a painful journey yet you come home with love.Life is hopeful.Lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,652 Points Dave Walker (8/25/2013 6:39:00 AM)

    A great poem, like it. (Report) Reply

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