I Crossed A Field Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

I Crossed A Field

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I crossed a field
A stile and gate
And breathed the country air,
So fresh the wind
Upon my face
Away from anywhere.

I saw a lark
Ascending up
Into the deep blue sky,
Out from the grass
Of waving gold
As I just walked on by.

I felt the sun
Upon my back
The warmth that I did feel,
As it did light
The countryside
And filled my heart with zeal.

I heard the blackbird
Singing so
Upon the highest tree,
So sweet the song
So gently phrased
So restful and so free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R Stansfield 03 August 2011

Beautiful, , I can feel how peaceful this day must have been

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Alison Cassidy 24 March 2008

A soft pastoral poem penned with a fine nib. A watercolor piece. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Thad Wilk 13 March 2008

A soft and soothing poem! A beautiful read Andrew! ! *10*! ! ! Thank you for sharing! ! ! Best regards , Friend Thad

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Ashley Reeves 13 March 2008

i do normal like to give advice but it is very hard it all ryhmes perfectly and very fluent, just dont change to quiickly on one subject, slowly change.

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Linda Marie Van Tassell 13 March 2008

I love the rhyme and rhythm of this poem. It is so fluid in its movement that it reminds me of a spring bathed in country air. Very, very nice!

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