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Adryan Bates


I Decide


Blood dripping down my lip
oh my god i must have flipped
the wolf inside came out
grief.. bottled inside, i have to shout
I have no control i need control
i have no control i need control!

if i kill i again it will be my blood shed
then the beast inside will stay unfed
I, Atreyu will have to die
to leave the werewolf inside behind

Submitted: Sunday, October 22, 2006
Edited: Tuesday, October 26, 2010

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  • Rookie Slick Sorathiya (2/8/2007 10:18:00 PM)

    Lol i can just imagine what your trying to describe, reminds me of a poem I wrote. Dude Dark poetry is the best keep it up, As Mary Nagy says create Love poems but one thing I have to advise keep it dark lol, your other poems are also really good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mary Nagy (11/12/2006 7:14:00 PM)

    I see a dark theme with your work. Interesting. I would love to see you write something about love or pleasures. I would bet you could do very well with that area of emotions too. Great work. Sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

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