I Decide Poem by Adryan Bates

I Decide

Rating: 5.0


Blood dripping down my lip
oh my god i must have flipped
the wolf inside came out
grief.. bottled inside, i have to shout
I have no control i need control
i have no control i need control!

if i kill i again it will be my blood shed
then the beast inside will stay unfed
I, Atreyu will have to die
to leave the werewolf inside behind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Slick Sorathiya 08 February 2007

Lol i can just imagine what your trying to describe, reminds me of a poem I wrote. Dude Dark poetry is the best keep it up, As Mary Nagy says create Love poems but one thing I have to advise keep it dark lol, your other poems are also really good.

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Mary Nagy 12 November 2006

I see a dark theme with your work. Interesting. I would love to see you write something about love or pleasures. I would bet you could do very well with that area of emotions too. Great work. Sincerely, Mary

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