I (Dissolved) Poem by Gajanan Balasubramaniam

I (Dissolved)



Stepped through entrance, no turning back
Mist engulfed what remained, blighting light
Uncertainity lay ahead, my senses reeled
Shadows abound where stood reality
Firm, I rely on the ground that I stand
Dampness creeps up my being
Mind seeking definitions...
Cognizance?
I dont care...
I live...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjana Aravind 07 August 2006

Well, this definitely is different... And the ending is good Anjana

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Ashish R 07 August 2006

Nice...the way u ended the poem. Ashish.

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