I Don'T Care Poem by adheez van der beanthz

I Don'T Care

Rating: 4.3


you are beautiful
though they can not agree
for me, you are the hopes
although the world see by one eyes

I don't care about the past
I really don't care..! ! !
I don't even want to know
despite that is a melancholic story

all I want is now
be bright
so I can hold

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 09 June 2013

The past sometimes leads us to future events. Whether it is good or bad we have to deal with it's consequences and hopefully we will overcome. Thanks.

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Rajendran Muthiah 10 June 2013

You don't care for her past. Good idea to scribble about. But the hero won't care if she seeks divorce in a few months because the hero has much respect for her individual freedom.

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Ramesh Rai 10 June 2013

do not care what other comment. beautiful xpression

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Kevin Patrick 10 June 2013

The past has no bearings on he feelings of the present, let it be a teacher, but not a tyrant. The closing is a lovely sentiment although I am curious hold on to what the girl or the illusion of safety she provides?

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Emily Angel 13 August 2013

It's beautiful. Holds an important message

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Owain Glyn 11 June 2013

You are quite right, it is the present that is important.

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David Wood 11 June 2013

Look to the future and take hold of the love.

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Nader Baheri 11 June 2013

we be a real lover then we dont care about what others think about us.we only care what our lover think~nb

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Neela Nath Das 11 June 2013

Really, past is past.We shouldn't look behind.

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