I Dream Poem by Adrian Mendez

I Dream

Rating: 5.0


In Darkness I feel as I close my Eyes,
This Emptiness it grips me Close,
With every gasp of Breath I Reach,
How much Longer until I Find,
That Place I see when I Sleep,
The Feeling of Life that fills my Soul,
The Path I seek when I am Lost,
How I wish this Night would Last,
That this dream I see would never Fade,
Why does it feel so Far Away?
But a distant Dream I wish to have,
A Hope I Cling to like My Thoughts,
To find a Place that calls for me,
To find a Heart that cries for me,
To find a World where I belong.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Burger 17 October 2011

This is a brillant epic my friend. I loves this poem. PLease continue to write more poerty for would love to read. Keep it up

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Romeo Della Valle 17 October 2011

Well, my dear Adrian, I only have one thing to say: CONGRATULATION! You finally found the right path that will lead you straight to light at the end of the tunnel: The Poetry World! You already got started by posting this well penned and poignant write! Outbursts of the heart! You got what it takes to make it in the Poetry World: TALENT! Keep it up! This is your first poem but not the last, I hope! 10+++I will always be by your side whenever you may need help! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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