Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,913 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

I Fear - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

I fear for the innocent
I fear for the law
I fear for the young
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Comments about I Fear by Dave Alan Walker

  • Rookie - 37 Points Hazel Connelly (9/11/2012 3:43:00 PM)

    Well written we all have fearat times. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Jose Guevara (4/22/2012 2:10:00 PM)

    I fear for my sanity sometimes too, but I rather enjoy living at the edge of it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 140 Points Jayachandran Chakrapany (3/23/2012 3:27:00 AM)

    try to look this world from a different angle.good effort.jk (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,914 Points Kevin Patrick (3/21/2012 8:59:00 PM)

    The closing is the best part, it makes me want to read it over and over again. which I am doing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 222 Points Adam Mckim (3/20/2012 4:47:00 AM)

    I like this. It reminds me of the poem I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You by Pablo Neruda only instead of love, it's fear. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 213 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (3/20/2012 4:33:00 AM)

    We live in the crazy world...well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Eric Cockrell (3/19/2012 7:46:00 PM)

    well written... compassion wields a mighty sword! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Daniel Warner (3/19/2012 11:49:00 AM)

    Good mental structure in this poem. (Report) Reply








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