I Feel Best Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
I Feel Best
I feel very best
When face the crucial test
It is called life journey
As gifted by an almighty
It is given on loan
Not to crying or moaning
It is to be made as simple as possible
Life shall never witness any trouble
Love others if possible
But hate never to any one
You are not allowed
As simple rule has to be followed
You have heart and soul
To respond with inner call
Try to listen and carefully think
It may always uplift and not sink
The sea waves two pose hostile posture
Make life sometimes unsecured
Yet we never leave venture
Go even deep to find treasure
Promise self to stand like rock
The strength is in stock
Utilize it properly
So as to lead life orderly
Nobody ends life in between
Only cowards are seen
With such steps
To warrant for slap
Needs rewriting John Roberts3 minutes ago Some of the wording needs reworking to clarify meaning Comment +1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago suggest too 7 minutes
Instructions - - - - - - Subhashchandra Adhav1 minute ago Good write! 8 minutes ago by hasmukh amathalal | Reply s
instructions for life... Just A Hack Named GuiltyLess than a minute ago poem clearly conveys it's message..well done Comment +1 18 minutes
Sir (Hasmukh Mehta) , I personally thank you for this enlightening poem and your stanza of the poem “You have heart and soul—To respond with inner call—Try to listen and carefully think—It may always uplift and not sink” brings a realization in us. Respected! Eagam Khaling, Darjeeling Jun 29,2014
Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 8 hrs · Unlike · 1
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A Wonderful poem on life from your pen. I feel very best When face the crucial test It is called life journey As gifted by an almighty.....Ready to face the challenges which the life has offered....Positivity it conveys. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.
face the crucial test is hard.. SaltShackles.com1 minute ago Good write! 18 minutes
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Love to humanity and such poem for better living is a pleasure to read with.