I Feel It Poem by Manonton Dalan

I Feel It

Rating: 3.9


gentle moving cumulus
painted bundled roses
white tint of smokes
cloudy; mud in brooks

hugging mountaintops
bare-naked shiny rocks
moist dripping down cliff
to ferns; grandpas on earth

water flows down river
shallow yet it sparkles
like your smile in morning mist
i could feel it, i could even taste

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 05 August 2008

Romantic write, its explores the scenic pleasures with sensuous tint of sexuality! A 10

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Manonton Dalan

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virginia, usa
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