(virginia, usa)

What do you think this poem is about?

i feel it

gentle moving cumulus
painted bundled roses
white tint of smokes
cloudy; mud in brooks

hugging mountaintops
bare-naked shiny rocks
moist dripping down cliff
to ferns; grandpas on earth

water flows down river
shallow yet it sparkles
like your smile in morning mist
i could feel it, i could even taste

Submitted: Monday, July 28, 2008
Edited: Friday, September 26, 2008

Comments about this poem (i feel it by Manonton Dalan )

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  • palas kumar ray (9/15/2008 3:24:00 PM)

    Fast flowing verse flows like a stream as a Lover speaks out.
    Marvellous.
    10/10

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  • Penny Hemans (8/23/2008 3:41:00 PM)

    excellent piece, I love your use of expression here; keep on....

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  • marvin brato (8/5/2008 11:32:00 PM)

    Romantic write, its explores the scenic pleasures with sensuous tint of sexuality! A 10

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