hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 67,038 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

I Feel No Fear - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

You were leaning
And winning
My kind heart
From the start

I felt very much part
But took it as human art
Where you appeared as heart queen
I shall always thank and remain

When I am near
I feel no fear
Even in the vicinity
Of sure probability

You are taking me away
To far of land to show way
The path of love and belonging
I sink far below while joking

You are what you are supposed to
But made me confine to
In your thoughts and company
For I shall always pray almighty


Comments about I Feel No Fear by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 8:29:00 AM)

    Powerful


    XZanthia Octoshroom1 hour ago
    Very strong powerful palm. Thank you: -)
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  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 8:29:00 AM)

    Fear

    issaac Riddle1 hour ago
    Hmm a little more clarity (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 8:28:00 AM)

    Great message


    James Whitmore1 hour ago
    This poem gave me a sense of love, that's the message I got from it.
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  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 8:28:00 AM)

    Good:


    Jay Matthews1 hour ago
    Good:
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  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 8:27:00 AM)

    alright

    Derek Aleanddare1 hour ago
    The 3rd part I don't quite understand
    Comment 1 Comment+1


    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    probabiliy of finding refusal.. that was in mi
    nd. she could have not refused still that thought came in mind (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 3:07:00 AM)

    You were leaning
    And winning (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 8, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, August 8, 2014


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