I Finally Found Forever Poem by Eric Cockrell

I Finally Found Forever

Rating: 5.0


i finally found forever...
in the laughter of a small child,
in a raindropp rolling down the window.
in a flower that opened and closed
in one fleeting day.
in the embers of a fire going out.
in the door latch opened,
the shadow walking across the room.
in the old woman dying,
her face peaceful and calm.
in the smile of the young boy cuffed
in the back of the police van...
in the revolver unloaded,
and put back in the drawer.
in the box of clothes
left on the doorstep.
in the cup of coffee shared,
the plate, the fork, and the smoke.
in the moment of eyes engaged,
and talking without words...
in the given without thinking,
the breathe that was felt!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 29 January 2012

Sir, I too felt beauty and wonder in the lines showing smile in the face of the young boy cuffed, in the eyes engaged moment, talking without words and in giving without thinking, the felt breath, ....Inspired lines like these make the poem elegant.

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Smoky Hoss 29 January 2012

Bravo! So well said Eric. This is a real gem, added to my personal favorites.10 +!

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