Wake Up

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I Fly, I Fly, I Fly Higher And Higher~~~ - Poem by Wake Up

I fly above
in no other sky
the smoke deters me not

Where there's smoke
there's a raging fire
I fly into the hot

The sky is perfect
that's why I fly,
I fly thru clouds and wind

I'll fly and fly until I die,
then rise up to
fly again

I'll fly and fly
'till I am high
on heaven's wing a loftin'

Two wings it takes
a synchronous flow

up and down
or just free and not begotten

There is nothing better
for a free bird
for eternity hot white
like pure wind-blown cotton

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Help, I can't get the ending right!

Comments about I Fly, I Fly, I Fly Higher And Higher~~~ by Wake Up

  • (7/31/2014 12:10:00 AM)


    A superb piece with superb imagery.........nothing less than 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Neela Nath Das (7/30/2014 10:44:00 PM)


    A superb imagery of freedom is portrayed wonderfully.We also hear the fluttering of big wings at the same time.Loved the pictorial quality. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 30, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, August 1, 2014


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