Ali Sabry

Rookie - 175 Points (11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

I Forgave All My Heart I Forgave - Poem by Ali Sabry

I forgave all my heart I forgave

In front of my eyes seen you shine with others

Why you forgotten the past

Why you forgotten the past very fast like this

I love you satisfied

You have purchased me for a low-price

And finally you sold me for the money and Creation

Oh my God in the sky

Please don't return back to me and tell me you regret I do not want you

I feel in hurt when I see you beside me please leave me alone

I don't want you come back to me and share the night with me

Don't return back to me and your tears on your face

My life to here is finished with you

It was a game

Whole my life with you was like a game

The game is over now at end because everything is now very clear to me

I saw you with others how can I forgive you

O traitor was extinguished within my heart candle because your hands are all destroyed my life

I don't have a traitor secretariat you have forgotten me and forget our past

I have ended my life with you

This is the end

This is the end


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I forgave all my heart I forgave

Comments about I Forgave All My Heart I Forgave by Ali Sabry

  • Rookie - 359 Points Lewis Findley (4/16/2015 7:39:00 PM)

    Wonderful indeed brother Ali. Lewis (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 150 Points R.benjamin Abate (4/15/2013 12:50:00 AM)

    heart wrenching. It really hits home. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sneha Jawaharya (11/2/2012 2:50:00 AM)

    very quite but a nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Justin Chan (10/23/2012 8:06:00 AM)

    Simple, and touching with that simpleness. Really good, Ali. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rouge Groer (10/17/2012 2:38:00 AM)

    heart breaking yet lovely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lloyd Savage (9/28/2012 4:28:00 PM)

    They require some thought and to be read by me on one day only to analyze. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lilac Wine (9/28/2012 3:40:00 AM)

    I forgave all my heart I forgave

    Ali this is such a beautiful poem, but with so much pain, with each word the reader truly feels the emotion. It awakens some heartbreaking memories.

    Well done sweetheart

    All the best
    xxxxxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deejay Manaleng (7/12/2012 7:53:00 AM)

    I have to admit i love this poem... i could almost see you telling her all those words as they circle around her very being (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Amoo Oluseun (7/9/2012 5:33:00 PM)

    your poem is cool very cool (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christina Phan (7/9/2012 11:54:00 AM)

    It was very emotional and tragic way things went. You put alot of thoughts and feelings how you felt at time. You told story that some of us will relate to some point in our life. You have talents and keep doing what you doing.10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 46 Points Dickson Mseti (7/8/2012 9:48:00 AM)

    Nice poem keep on writitng I saw you with others how can I forgive you Love should be a joyish adventure instead of a tragic. Read mine Trace my love (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,188 Points Kevin Patrick (7/6/2012 8:14:00 PM)

    It would be easy to say let go, but that would be a lie fostered by ignorance of knowing that pain never completly goes away, instead let it rest, accept the pain now and let it die slowly so that you move on tommorow writing good work like this (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Erika Michelle (7/4/2012 7:58:00 PM)

    that was beautiful... i could tell that there were a lot meaning to it despite the low use of vocabulary. it sprung tears to my eyes, keep on writting beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Precious Okidika (7/1/2012 7:46:00 AM)

    Ali i like the fact that your poem has a plot, but you need on your sentence construction and diction (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Louis Cecile (7/1/2012 5:27:00 AM)

    This is the best work I have read of yours yet. Much more deeper and controlled emotions to the poem. I liked the reference to being sold, something many can sympathise with in life. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karan Kamble (7/1/2012 2:46:00 AM)

    this one is just so perfect.. The part where you say dont come back and also when u want that one person again is just superb.. Bravo fellow poet.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Darren David Weaver (6/29/2012 4:31:00 PM)

    Forgiveness and regrets.... to regret anything is to regret living.... mistakes are made, they are part of life... I like this poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madhavi Basak (6/29/2012 1:46:00 PM)

    Its a nice poem.i like it and i like it more for i share d same feelings in my life! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christiana Habby (6/28/2012 10:54:00 PM)

    Great
    Splendid
    Wonderful
    Brilliant
    Kip it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 48 Points Fragments Of Light And Love (6/28/2012 7:46:00 AM)

    forgiveness is a process...sometimes we havent forgiven yet but another thing comes in....in this pooint, forgiveness must become a virtue (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 26, 2012



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