Ali Sabry

Rookie - 152 Points (11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

I Have Chosen You From Among The Beautiful - Poem by Ali Sabry

I have chosen you from among the beautiful

I paid for my life to meet you

I have chosen you for one reason only

You are the second and spiritual harmony

You are my soul twin

You are my soul breeze

My heart all of you

Drum beats of my heart & accuracy of each particular tone calls your beautiful name

O, O beautiful picturesque

I hear your voice fresh from a distance across the continents

Beautiful voice as ringing piano

I do not know where I came from my lovely princess

I lived alone and watching the walls in my house

But now I got my wish that I waited for many years

I got you honey finally

I've got a beauty attractive

I have won the grand prize

Darling I promise you at end that we will live happily forever for the duration of our lives until the day we die

God Bless You In Whole Your Life

Sincerely You're Lover Forever In Whole Your Life
The Romantic Man
Ali Sabry

Comments about I Have Chosen You From Among The Beautiful by Ali Sabry

  • Silver Star - 3,102 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (5/11/2015 12:25:00 PM)

    Rich in romance and loaded with love my friend. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,245 Points Michael Walker (5/4/2015 7:18:00 PM)

    Sincere emotion of love. 'piano ringing? ' I think 'piano playing'. 'Got you'? Maybe 'I've won you/ I've won your heart'.
    ' for the duration of our lives/' 'for the rest of our lives'. Just a few suggestions. Your friend, Michael Walker. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 344 Points Richard Blay (4/28/2015 5:54:00 PM)

    Well done fellow. I feel the expression.

    Try changing the line...
    * I got you honey finally* to *Honey, I got you finally*

    keep on fellow. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 397 Points Karunanidhy S (4/25/2015 3:58:00 AM)

    Your deep love is displayed in letter and spirit throught the poem..
    May God Bless you with what you need rather than what you like..
    If your like and need coincide, well and good..
    If not, it is God's will for your gain and you will! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 720 Points val Rogers (4/12/2015 7:10:00 PM)

    Such touching words. Great write my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarojini Pattayat (10/27/2012 8:36:00 AM)

    interesting actually.True picture of a pure love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Robyn Mcdowall (10/4/2012 11:07:00 AM)

    Beautiful, love truly is your weak spot
    RMx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Cindirighandi S. (10/1/2012 3:24:00 PM)

    Aaah this warmed my heart. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,297 Points * Sunprincess * (8/24/2012 3:51:00 AM)

    Very nice words of love written beautifully.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Johannes Mphamo (8/23/2012 11:40:00 AM)

    i can see that you are moved by love. keep up the good work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie De Sire (8/14/2012 11:51:00 PM)

    really very nice poem i like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 136 Points Indranil Bhaduri (8/7/2012 1:06:00 AM)

    Beautiful, really beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Shanice Rodriguez (7/30/2012 4:23:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, nice use of words to the person you love (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Buxton Shippy (7/27/2012 2:52:00 PM)

    You have a gift to communicate in words what so many lack; a lovely poem indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 252 Points Oladehinde J. Ibikunle (7/24/2012 4:58:00 PM)

    I love this, it's really captivating. More from you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (7/20/2012 6:34:00 AM)

    Love's reminder is the words we write.
    A binding love is the love we live.
    Well written expression of emotion to
    she who is special in your life. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Supriya Prathapan (7/15/2012 8:49:00 AM)

    Beautiful words for your lady love. Reflects how deeply you feel for her. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fonia Tan (7/15/2012 1:23:00 AM)

    Very beautifully written. Though slightly conventional but perhaps if that is what u are looking for, then u have achieved! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 263 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (7/14/2012 2:34:00 AM) sensitive and pure feelings Ali. i like the honest and pure feelings those are spirit in you nice poem. so cool.! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Pradeep Uthaman (7/14/2012 2:17:00 AM)

    Beautiful Poem. You have a Brilliant way of narrating the deep arena of romance in a very beautiful mood. I t creates a wonderful feeling when we read it. Great. Keep it up and Keep in Touch (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 12, 2012

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