joana bluementhal

Rookie (01.09.1988 / kanpur, India)

I Hope This Life Wasn'T Mine! - Poem by joana bluementhal

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I am trying to push my tears aside,
praying to Him, for sorrows to divide.
Frantically I am searching for a shade,
though all I see is a razor blade.
Tortured, crippled, dragged into gloom,
life is no more than a shattered dream.
Papa's angel, Mama's darling,
now a broken verse which noone can sing.


Comments about I Hope This Life Wasn'T Mine! by joana bluementhal

  • Rookie Brian Dorn (11/4/2006 2:45:00 PM)

    Great write, joana... melancholic but great!
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  • Rookie Red Blooded Black Hearted (8/16/2006 11:53:00 PM)

    that was a beautiful poem.
    I hope that u don't turn to the blake anymore.
    Great write,
    smiles N hugs, Willow: -) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 16, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 25, 2010


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