Treasure Island

Dr.Rajendra Tela,Nirantar


I kept living in darkness


I kept
Living in darkness
With pessimism
In my
Heart and mind
You always
Lived in light
With an
Enlightened
Heart and mind
But than
I fail to understand
Why you did not
Do any thing
To take me out Of
Darkness
56-300-26-09-2013

Submitted: Thursday, September 26, 2013
Edited: Friday, September 27, 2013

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Pessism, optimism, attitude, life
Dr.Rajendra Tela, Nirantar

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  • Roseann Shawiak (10/19/2013 1:48:00 AM)

    No one can take you out of darkness, it is your choice to do it or not. There seems to be a subtle under tone of blame, for someone failing to understand. Just seemed to come across to me that way. Definitely liked this
    poem though. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (10/8/2013 2:39:00 AM)

    Living in darkness or in light
    It will always be our conscious choice
    For this life to make it dull or bright
    All we have to do is to listen to the inner voice....

    (Good poem - keep writing) (Report) Reply

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