I Kissed Him Like An Octopus Poem by Martina Danielova
I Kissed Him Like An Octopus
Everything is always printed
in one kiss:
hello, hold on and goodbye
your lips
sweetest hydromel i have drunk - ever.
...that was okay...
whatever..!
Your lips softest plush
thats why i have this crush
on you. All summer long.
Shame we do not go along..
If one would let you - 'see you next time'
you would say forever
see you soon
or never ever..
finally you should learn
to love
someone else more than yourself.
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4/25/2024 8:35:06 AM # 1.0.0.1119
The title of your poem is really eye catching, though the text doesn't contain anything as deep as the title suggests. Some descriptions are very good, like: 'your lips sweetest hydromel i have drunk - ever.'... Lips compared to hydromel, a drink, is fantastic. 'Your lips softest plush thats why i have this crush on you. All summer long. Shame we do not go along..'...Lips again, as the reason for the crush, is a wonderful thought. 'finally you should learn to love someone else more than yourself.' ... This is really an anti climax! Well written, over all.